1.今年上海市將開始新一輪三年環(huán)保行動計劃。新三年環(huán)保行動計劃內(nèi)容與第一輪三年行動計劃有何不同？新一輪的環(huán)保行動要達到什么目標？

模板句型精析：This year,Shanghai will launch a new round of three-year environmental protection campaign. How does this campaign differ from that of the first round and what does the new round intend to achieve?

常見不當譯文：This year,Shanghai will launch a new round of three-year environmental protection campaign. How does the new round of three-year environmental protection campaign differ from that of the first round of three-year environmental protection campaign and what does the new round of environmental protection campaign tend to achieve?

模板句型精析：作為訪談類文章的開場白，這個模塊句子的特點在于翻譯時對“減詞法”的運用。常見不當譯文的問題在于太啰嗦，極大地影響了翻譯的效率以及聽眾的情緒。英語與中文的表達形式不同，往往求新求簡。因此考生可按照模板句型進行同類項的合并，不難發(fā)現(xiàn)“環(huán)保行動計劃”是句中出現(xiàn)頻率最高的部分。因此，可利用減詞法對其進行簡化。除此以外，在同一個句子或段落中適當運用代詞，如it,they等，也是口譯中非常務實、有效的簡譯方式。

2. 最近一個時期，上海連續(xù)出現(xiàn)藍天白云、空氣清新的好天氣。

模板句型1:The recent days have witnessed/seen the incessant fine weather with blue sky,white clouds and fresh air in Shanghai.

模板句型2:Recently,Shanghai has been enjoying a fine weather with blue sky,white clouds and fresh air.

常見不當譯法：Recently,the fine weather with blue sky,white clouds and fresh air has appeared incessantly in Shanghai.

模板句型精析：常見不當譯文有明顯的翻譯腔。這個模塊句子是“多主句”，可如模板句型1，選擇時間段為主語，運用模板句型“時間點/段+see/witness+adj.+n.”進行翻譯；也可如模板句型2，選擇地點“上海”作為主語，這時，后面的謂語動詞應選用enjoy，這個詞也是非常高頻的模塊詞，比如說某企業(yè)“享譽全球”，可以用enjoy global reputation來表達。能用好“多主句”，考生在考場上就不會“六神無主”了。

3.上海的空氣質量的提高，可以說是上海環(huán)境治理取得了初步成效。上海的第一輪環(huán)保三年行動計劃涉及水環(huán)境治理、大氣環(huán)境治理、固體廢物處置、綠化建設、重點工業(yè)區(qū)環(huán)境綜合整治等五大領域110個項目。

模板句型1:The improvement of Shanghai's air quality shows/indicates/manifests the initial success in Shanghai's environmental treatment. The first round of Shanghai's three-year environmental protection campaign involved/contained 110 projects in the 5 major areas/fields/domains/realms, including water environment treatment, air environment treatment, disposal of solid waste, greening construction, and comprehensive environmental treatment of key industrial areas.

模板句型2:The improvement of Shanghai's air quality is an indication/a manifestation of the initial success in Shanghai's environmental treatment. The first round of Shanghai's three-year environmental protection campaign involved/contained water environment treatment, air environment treatment, disposal of solid waste, greening construction, and comprehensive environmental treatment of key industrial areas. The above five major areas covered 110 projects.

模板句型精析：模塊長句中第一句的難點在于“可以說是”，這里并不是“say”的意思。訪談類文字中出現(xiàn)相對口語化的詞語的頻率更高，在理解的基礎上進行翻譯是非常重要的。模板句型1使用show，indicate 或manifest 便是明智的選擇，因為前面的現(xiàn)象正是環(huán)境治理的成果。這種高頻模塊詞在研究報告中出現(xiàn)的頻率也很高，比如“本圖/表/研究報告表明……”等。而模板句型2則做了“動靜轉化”，通過be+a(n)+n.的結構來完成和原有動詞的轉換。句子的后半部分是一個長句，是典型的并列結構。因此，考生可如模板句型1,通過involve/contain.., including...的結構性語言完成翻譯，當然，“包括”未必譯作include,這里充分體現(xiàn)了語言選擇的多樣性。在口譯時，必須做到順句驅動，因此考生按照模板句型2翻譯時，結尾部分宜采用“分句法”另起一句。除此以外，對于“在……領域”這些引導并列結構的詞組，考生也應熟記于心。